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brother, family, flash fiction, Jayne Martin, mother, oranges, Ouija, short stories
by Jayne Martin
The overpowering scent of orange blossoms, although there wasn’t an orange tree within miles of my Brooklyn brownstone, could only mean one thing. Mother was here. Raised amidst the orange groves of Florida, she had surrounded herself with its bouquet in everything from soap to candles to body lotion throughout her lifetime and she hadn’t abandoned it in death either.
The tea kettle began to whistle, despite there being no flame beneath it. Oh, God. She wasn’t just passing through this time. Mother wanted to talk.
Her visits had been pleasant in the beginning, just a whiff of orange now and then — a comforting reassurance that our loved ones lived on and still watched over us. But of course Mother couldn’t just leave it at that.
“Hi, Mom.”
I’d told none of the family about her visits, but for my birthday this year my older brother Eric had inexplicably given me a Ouija board, while taking pains to avoid eye contact. He always had tried to push her care off on me.
The small, wooden heart sailed across the board under the light touch of my fingertips. Say what you will about my mother. She’s nothing if not consistent.
“Yes, I have put on a few pounds … No, Mother. That’s not the reason I’m still single …”
Jayne Martin was the winner of Vestal Review’s 2016 VERA award for flash fiction. Her work has appeared in Boston Literary Magazine, Midwestern Gothic, Literary Orphans, F(r)iction, Five2One, Blink Inc, Spelk, 100-Word Story, Flash Frontier, Yellow Chair Review, Connotation Press, and Hippocampus. She is the author of Suitable for Giving: A Collection of Wit with a Side of Wry. Find her on Twitter @Jayne_Martin. Author page: http://injaynesworld.blogspot.com/p/blog-page.html
Thanks for sharing, Vic. Best wishes, MG.
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Another great story!
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Thanks for stopping by, Fiona. I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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Great story, Jane! If I may ask, what was the inspiration for your story?
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It came from a prompt: Write a story that contains a strong smell. I love the scent of orange blossoms so that’s what came first, and then it just went the way it wanted to go from there. Happy you enjoyed it, Joseph.
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Sharply observed, citrus on wry – your story made me smile. Thanks Jayne 🙂
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Thanks so much, Alex.
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Nice one! 😊
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Thank you, Jan.
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Jayne!! I love how you let the reader realize her mother is a ghost and the nice twisty ending that made me laugh!!!
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Thanks so much, Gay. Happy you enjoyed it.
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Great……only wish it was longer, so I know what happens next. What a talent!!!!!
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Thank you for the kind words, Angie. I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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So human and true-feeling. And Ironic! Does the kvetching never end?!
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It never does. 🙂 Thanks so much.
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Hi J,
An interesting and well written little story. But made me think of my mom. Martha
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Thank you, Martha. Hope she’s not haunting you.
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Love it…
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So happy you did. Thank you, Cheryl.
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